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You are the light that still shines on me
FOr you I will pine eternally
YoU were the one who did set me free
YouR love will always my comfort be
RoseS smell sweetest, my fragrant plea

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SouL unto soul and heart unto heart
FoOlish is one who would tear this apart
EVery love has hardhips right from the start
Eternity's for those who choose ne'er to part  
acrostic love poem #2
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Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a sweet and modest love poem. and you are so right to mention that every love story faces tough times but the ones who stick together continue to sail forever :)
Qita
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha well, i assume that means you liked it
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyesyesyesplz: I did.
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Delice1941 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Lot of patience needed to write an acrostic poem. Love the images that accompany your work:rose:
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
itz awesome!!! ^^
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TatankaWanjila Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional General Artist
its beautiful :)
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awww... you might like "Just Because"
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