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You are the light that still shines on me
FOr you I will pine eternally
YoU were the one who did set me free
YouR love will always my comfort be
RoseS smell sweetest, my fragrant plea

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SouL unto soul and heart unto heart
FoOlish is one who would tear this apart
EVery love has hardhips right from the start
Eternity's for those who choose ne'er to part  
acrostic love poem #2
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Themoonofmyheart Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a sweet and modest love poem. and you are so right to mention that every love story faces tough times but the ones who stick together continue to sail forever :)
Qita
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tommyboywood Aug 11, 2013  Professional Writer
:)
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Relic-Angel May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconawwwplz:
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tommyboywood May 24, 2013  Professional Writer
haha well, i assume that means you liked it
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Relic-Angel May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconyesyesyesplz: I did.
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:icondelice1941:
Lot of patience needed to write an acrostic poem. Love the images that accompany your work:rose:
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:icongoldenflamenalu:
itz awesome!!! ^^
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TatankaWanjila Feb 2, 2013  Professional General Artist
its beautiful :)
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tommyboywood Feb 2, 2013  Professional Writer
awww... you might like "Just Because"
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