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He noticed that her hair was as blonde as the sun,
perfectly brushed, hanging loosely about her shoulders.

He noticed that her lips were as red as crimson,
curled slightly up, in an everlasting smile.

He noticed that her wedding ring glistened in the light,
a band of gold, a reminder of good times past.

He noticed that her eyes were closed as if asleep,
those beautiful blues, the windows to her soul.


But what he noticed most of all was a heart no longer beating,
a chest no longer rising and falling with breath.

"This deafening silence; O to hear her laugh once again!"


As she lay there now in her eternal bedchamber,
her lifeless body as still as the hands of a broken timepiece,
he couldn't help notice, no, he couldn't help but notice...

That his life would never be the same.
somtimes it's just soooo hard...

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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice anaphora here, this is quite a sad text, still great though. :)
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks lena
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Deeply moving. Thank you for sharing. :iconwhiteroseplz:
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes...how often and how many
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7LULU7 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This legit made me cry, if it made me cry that means it's a beautiful piece :love:
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks again for your kind comments. my next one will be happy, i promise! :)
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7LULU7 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D okay that's good a little positive work won't hurt
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tickersymbol Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your words cause one to ache with him...beautifully and powerfully written. :heart:
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks tick
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tickersymbol Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure.....p.s. I like my nickname. I have had very few in my lifetime, and I find them quite endearing. :)
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