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He'd seen her face a hundred times before,
but now 'twas different, of that he was sure!
Her eyes were afire, her lips were blood red.
The fruit in her hand: "Eat some," she said.

"For look I was blind. Behold, now I see!
The fruit doth taste well, now harken to me.
The earth is our home, it's ours to explore.
We'll experience it now like never before!"


He gazed at the fruit, then looked up at her.
He felt somewhat flushed, his blood was astir.
That body! That face! He wanted her so!
He snatched at the fruit, he'd give it a go!

The rest, as they say, is history now.
For six-thousand years we've suffered, and how!
If only he'd listened to the ONE who was true,
life would be so sweet, for me and for you.

GENESIS 3:6,7
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:iconamen-no-suomynona:
~amen-no-suomynona Apr 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Huh. So humans were weak to begin with.
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:icontommyboywood:
~tommyboywood Apr 12, 2013  Professional Writer
Free will is just what it implies i.e. freedom to choose. Adam could have chosen a course of integrity but instead gave in to temptation. All of us face similar choices daily. Like the saying goes: JUST SAY NO!
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~amen-no-suomynona Apr 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah... Wonder why we only had two choices: Yes or No.
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:icontommyboywood:
~tommyboywood Apr 13, 2013  Professional Writer
to demonstrate whether or not they truly appreciated and loved their heavenly Father, who had given them everything. to illustrate: does it mean more to you when a child (or other loved one) tells you that they love you or when they demonstrate by their actions that they do? Love is the dominant force in the universe (John 3:16; 1 John 4:8), and man is made in God's image, therefore is able to love also. when Adam and Eve rebelled, they showed by their actions that they had no real appreciation or love for God, and were therefore not entitled to the gift of eternal life (see poem "The Tree of Life).
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:iconamen-no-suomynona:
~amen-no-suomynona Apr 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh. Thanks for the explanation! :)
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:icontomoko-karahime:
~Tomoko-Karahime Mar 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
wow.. powerful! I LOVE IT xD
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:icontommyboywood:
~tommyboywood Mar 13, 2013  Professional Writer
ach tung baby!
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:icontomoko-karahime:
~Tomoko-Karahime Mar 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
XDDD
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:iconeverlasting90:
*Everlasting90 Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh, the Fall of Man.
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