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the sad little girl
     
               a real hope for her future

                                      pray for the children    
hope shines
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Delice1941 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
Found out just recently that there are distinctions to be made, in this type of writing. Haiku deals with nature Senryu deals with emotions both are written 5 7 5. Am just starting to classify mine, although I sometimes forget:rose:
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks also check out lebruyere page on more poetic structure stuff!
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Delice1941 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
Will do:rose:
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap: Sounds like Cinderella: young girl loses her loved ones but stays strong and finds love.
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
or finds someone to love her
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
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