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the sad little girl
     
               a real hope for her future

                                      pray for the children    
hope shines
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:icondelice1941:
Found out just recently that there are distinctions to be made, in this type of writing. Haiku deals with nature Senryu deals with emotions both are written 5 7 5. Am just starting to classify mine, although I sometimes forget:rose:
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tommyboywood Mar 11, 2013  Professional Writer
thanks also check out lebruyere page on more poetic structure stuff!
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Everlasting90 Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap: Sounds like Cinderella: young girl loses her loved ones but stays strong and finds love.
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tommyboywood Mar 9, 2013  Professional Writer
or finds someone to love her
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Everlasting90 Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
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