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Rebellion, independence; yet what have we gained?
Alas, six-thousand years of suffering and pain.
The abuse of free will brought the sentence of death,
yet men will still curse Him with their last dying breath.

All of the hatred, the prejudice, and the wars.
All of the sadness, the despair, the closed doors.
All of the infants who died before they could live.
All of the mothers who for them would their lives give.

Genocides, jihads, ethnic cleansings, crusades.
Mankind produces evil in aces and spades.
Still, amid all the bad there has also been good,
there have always been lovers who did what they could.

Behold!  Comes a day when grey skies turn to blue,
the millennial reign of the One who is true!
The dawn of a new day where love reigns supreme.
His brief time here on earth was but a foregleam.

When that day arrives planet earth is reborn.
No more eyes filled with tears or faces forlorn.
Children so perfect that it seems like a dream.
Polluted waters replaced with clear crystal streams.

Ride atop an elephant! Touch the horns of a gnu!
Don't fear the lion, he just wants to play with you.
Grab the asp by the tail! Stroke the fur of the bear!
Run with wild horses! Rub the ears of the hare!

A question to ponder for me and for you:
Will I use my free will to support what is true?
The choice that we make will determine our fate;
Will we choose to enter through life's narrow gate?

reflection on the promises made (Revelation 21:3-5; Isaiah 11:6-9)

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I love it; it's very nice to read.:) and not only is this poem beautiful, but it is also true! :)
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed!  Thanks
you're welcome :)
Ryna63 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is some great stuff. beautifully written.. more people should read this
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol  Thanks. Feel free to spread the word, and please check out my spiritual folder for more
Ryna63 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sure will :)
Delice1941 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
This vision is wonderful, a pleasure to read:rose:
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it's a comin'
RandomRadish7 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so amazing! :D more people need to read and learn about stuff like this!!! :) Great poem
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you.  if you like this sort of thing, check out my spiritual folder!
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